Yaad......

[Alina]

Jab bahar ka Mausam aaye ga
Aur phool khilain gay gulshan main
Ik phool jo tum ne toora tha
Us jesa tum na paao gay
tab Yaad Wo khushbo aaye gi
Us khushbo sa tum na Paao gay

Sawan k Maheenay main Badal
Jab Cham cham kar k Barsay ga
Aur Ro ro kar Badal tum ko
Pheghaam koi day jaye ga....
Tab yaad wo Aankhain Aayein gi
Un aankho sa tum na Paao gay....

Jab dost koi keh kar tum ko
Ik Aas kahiin day jaaye ga
Ya khawab koi day kar tum se
Jab door kabhi ho jaaye ga....
Tab yaad wo manzar aaye ga...
tum us ko bhula na paao gay

jab ghazlon main Afsano main
Unwaan kisi ka Rakho gay
Aur "Woh" tumhari ghazlon ko
Tooti tooti keh jaaye ga
Tab yaad Woh ghazlain aayein gi
jo Ghazlain thi tooti tooti
Per un jesi tum na paao gay

Ab jab bhi Chandni raton main
tum chand falak per Dekho gay
ya Shabeeh kisi ki Uss main
Jab tum dekhna chaho gay
tu yaad mera naam aaye ga
jo naam tha chand k jesa
Aur yaad wo Chehra aaye ga
tum laakh bhulana chaho gay
tab yaad meri tumhain aaye gi..
Per hamko tum na paao gay...!!

[Hearts_Princess]

nice one bohat achi koshish hai shurwaat bohat achi hui par last main aur ghazal wali line main rhyme ki kami si lagrahi hai

keep it up

thanks for sharing

[Alina]

First of all m not Shayer tu Mistakes ho gaee tu mujhay unhe durust karnay k liye Shayer ka dimaagh chahiye jo yaqeenan mera nahi...
Second: ager aap issay koshish keh rahi hain tu its a big complement for me...Kiun k yeh main ne daily diary main Kha makha likha tha...Jissay parh kar My friend said "U never told me that u r a born poet"
So i think i shud b share this...............!!!!!

[Hearts_Princess]

Dear agar ap itna likh sakti ho to isko sahi bhi kar sakti ho
aur jahan tak poet hone ki baat hai main bhi koi itni expert nahi hoon poetry likhne main but kuch kuch likh leti hoon and aap jis tarha words likhti ho unko sanwarti ho apne style se woh ek poet hi kar sakta hai isliye beshaq aapke friend ne sahi kaha hai

[Farhan]

Nice effort .... thanks for sharing

[Alina]

As i said before....Ager ap issay effort keh rahay hain tu its a big complement for me....Thanks....!!

[Farhan]

i knew its ur starting ... and in starting it is a big effort ....