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    # Kisi ki Ghazal ka jawab#

    Jis per ki tum ne baat kahi
    Wo per buhat hi soona tha
    Jab khizan ka mausam aaya tha
    Na koi musafir aata tha
    Na koi churiya gati thi
    Na koi Sawan aata tha
    Ik chilchilati dhoop thi
    Na koi paas saaya tha
    tab ham ne khizan k patto ko
    Iss per se Chuna tha
    K Phir bahar ka mausam aaye ga
    tab Panchi geet sunaaye gay
    Phir se sawan aaye ga
    Raaton main jugno chamkay gay
    Falak pe sitaro ki tarah
    Ik shaakh pe chakoor chanda ko
    Raato ko jaag k dekhay ga

    Tab ham ne wafa ki thi tum se
    Din raat tumharay paas rahi
    Jab tum ko kabhi pyasa dekha...
    Ankho se ik barsaat hui
    Ham ne khizan k patto ko
    Chunnay main buhat dhoop sahi
    Ab dhoop ki sakhti chubhti hai
    Per chaaon kisi k naam hui

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    Re: # Kisi ki Ghazal ka jawab#

    Nice effort ... keep writing
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    Re: # Kisi ki Ghazal ka jawab#

    Meri koshish ki pazeeraye ka shukriya...!!

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    Re: # Kisi ki Ghazal ka jawab#

    its not just an effort .... itsss beautiful
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    Re: # Kisi ki Ghazal ka jawab#

    thanks for ur appreciation...!!

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    Re: # Kisi ki Ghazal ka jawab#

    Nice sharing keep it up
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    Re: # Kisi ki Ghazal ka jawab#

    thanks MAlaila....!!

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    Re: # Kisi ki Ghazal ka jawab#

    it is a good poem alina, but it does make me wonder, which is the poem that it is in reply to?

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    Re: # Kisi ki Ghazal ka jawab#

    ahaaaaaaaaaan but kis ghazal ka jawab hy;p
    Tm mosam mosam lgty ho..
    Jo pal pal rang badlty ho,
    Tum sawn sawn lgty ho
    Jo sadion bad brsty ho,
    Tum sapna sapna lgty ho
    Jo mjhko kam kam dikhty ho,
    Tum pal pal mjh sy lrty ho
    Per phr bhe achy lagty ho
    Baat to hay shrmili c..
    Pr khny ko dil chahta ha,
    Lo aj tmhn yh keh dalo...
    Tum apny apny lgty ho...

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    Re: # Kisi ki Ghazal ka jawab#

    Thanks 4 Liking Nadeem bhai......!!

    Ghazal...Dont worry aap ka jawab nahi....!!

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    Re: # Kisi ki Ghazal ka jawab#

    beautiful one

    keep sharing
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    Re: # Kisi ki Ghazal ka jawab#

    thanks Evo...!!

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    Re: # Kisi ki Ghazal ka jawab#

    u welcome n post more
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    Re: # Kisi ki Ghazal ka jawab#

    you are most welcome alina

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