Custom Search
Your own Poetry Thread, Adhooray Sapnay... in Poetic & Literary Society; Wo Din suhanay kitnay thay Jab chotay chotay sapnay thay Raaton main pariyun ka aana Saath apnay mujh ko lay ...

FamilyBunker Pakistani Community Forum

↑ Grab this Headline Animator

+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 8 of 8

Thread: Adhooray Sapnay...

  1. 11-28-2009 06:39 PM #1
    Alina's Avatar
    Alina
    Alina is offline FB Angels
    Alina is on a distinguished road

    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    Karachi
    Age
    20
    Posts
    180
    Thanks
    38
    Thanked 31 Times in 18 Posts
    Rep Power
    19
    1
    None
     
     
    Total add|reduce point: 0 times

    Default Adhooray Sapnay...

    Wo Din suhanay kitnay thay
    Jab chotay chotay sapnay thay
    Raaton main pariyun ka aana
    Saath apnay mujh ko lay jana
    Wo Urna Asmaano main
    Wo jhoomna thundi fizaaon main
    Wo roothna chooti baaton per
    Aur mann jana bahanon main
    Wo chand ko chanda Mama kehna
    Aur us se khoob shikayat karna
    Jab khud ko akelay pana tu
    Kuch Geet Khushi k gaa lena
    Wo din buhat suhanay thay
    Per din wo sab beet chukay
    Ab mehfil main tanhaaee hai
    Ab chanda Mama rootha hai
    K ham ne ik harjaee ko
    Ghalti se chand jo keh daala
    Raaton ko sapnay aatay hain
    Per sab adhooray hotay hain
    Un main paryaan nahi hoti
    Ab woh bhi ham se kafa huii
    aur jo sapno main aaya tha
    Woh Saray Sapnay Toor gaya
    Aur ik din ham ko choor gaya...!!

    +1 EXP


    Similar Threads:
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote Share with Facebook

  2. The Following User Says Thank You to Alina For This Useful Post:

    Farhan (12-01-2009)
  3. 12-01-2009 11:57 PM #2
    Alina's Avatar
    Alina
    Alina is offline FB Angels
    Alina is on a distinguished road

    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    Karachi
    Age
    20
    Posts
    180
    Thanks
    38
    Thanked 31 Times in 18 Posts
    Rep Power
    19
    1
    None
     
     
    Total add|reduce point: 0 times

    Default Re: Adhooray Sapnay...

    I think kisi ko Yeh poetry nai lagi=(

    Apni Age k lehaz se tu main #1 ho
    Bcoz yahan k Shair Age main Mujh se baray hain...!!



    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote Share with Facebook
  4. 12-02-2009 02:36 AM #3
    xeon's Avatar
    xeon
    xeon is offline FB Admin Team
    xeon is a splendid one to behold xeon is a splendid one to behold xeon is a splendid one to behold xeon is a splendid one to behold xeon is a splendid one to behold xeon is a splendid one to behold xeon is a splendid one to behold xeon is a splendid one to behold

    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Location
    Uncharted Region
    Posts
    2,996

    Awards Showcase
    24 Months Award / Point Value: 50 Most Naughty Award / Point Value: 50 Most Funny Male Member Award / Point Value: 50 12 MOnths Award / Point Value: 50 Senior Most Award / Point Value: 50 2nd Position / Point Value: 127
    Total Awards: 6
    Total Points: 377

    Thanks
    16
    Thanked 48 Times in 44 Posts
    My Mood
    Paranoid
    Rep Power
    164
    1
    None
     
     
    Total add|reduce point: 0 times

    Default Re: Adhooray Sapnay...

    Sorry sis, yeh poetry ke maamlai main mai Na-blad hoon. tu maire comment kee koi importance nahi hogee but phir bhi mashAllah sai buhat achhi koshish hai.



    OH ALLAH! Make useful for me what You taught me and teach me knowledge that will be useful to me! (Ameen)
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote Share with Facebook

  5. The Following User Says Thank You to xeon For This Useful Post:

    Alina (12-13-2009)
  6. 12-02-2009 07:42 AM #4
    Churchill's Avatar
    Churchill
    Churchill is offline Super Admin
    Churchill is a splendid one to behold Churchill is a splendid one to behold Churchill is a splendid one to behold Churchill is a splendid one to behold Churchill is a splendid one to behold Churchill is a splendid one to behold Churchill is a splendid one to behold

    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Age
    40
    Posts
    13,077

    Awards Showcase
    Dashing Award / Point Value: 50 24 Months Award / Point Value: 50 FB King / Point Value: 50 Best Person / Point Value: 50 Best FB Jori / Point Value: 50 12 MOnths Award / Point Value: 50 Senior Most Award / Point Value: 50 Admin Award / Point Value: 50
    Total Awards: 8
    Total Points: 400

    Thanks
    108
    Thanked 247 Times in 221 Posts
    Blog Entries
    25
    My Mood
    Angelic
    Rep Power
    567
    3
    Advanced
     
     
    Total add|reduce point: 0 times

    Default Re: Adhooray Sapnay...

    bohat achi poem hai alina




    Pakistan Cricket Sucks !!!
    Pakistan Cricket Team and PCB officials should be handed over to the people of Sialkot
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote Share with Facebook

  7. The Following User Says Thank You to Churchill For This Useful Post:

    Alina (12-13-2009)
  8. 12-02-2009 11:44 AM #5
    Neo
    Neo is offline FB Elites Neo will become famous soon enough Neo will become famous soon enough

    Join Date
    Nov 2008
    Posts
    621
    Thanks
    14
    Thanked 18 Times in 17 Posts
    My Mood
    Aggressive
    Rep Power
    50
    1
    None
     
     
    Total add|reduce point: 0 times

    Default Re: Adhooray Sapnay...

    lolzz@apni age k hisab se to no 1 hoon.. ... hahaha khudhi tareefain karti jaye gi ye humein bhi moqa dengee tareefain karnay ka ?....

    acha tello one thing... bachpan may CHAND ko CHANDA MAMA or baray ho kar usay apnay mehboob se kyo tabeer kya jata hai ?


    +1 EXP


    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote Share with Facebook
  9. 12-02-2009 12:21 PM #6
    SaGhiR's Avatar
    SaGhiR
    SaGhiR is offline Lead Moderator
    SaGhiR has much to be proud of SaGhiR has much to be proud of SaGhiR has much to be proud of SaGhiR has much to be proud of SaGhiR has much to be proud of SaGhiR has much to be proud of SaGhiR has much to be proud of SaGhiR has much to be proud of
    Tournaments Won: 1

    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Posts
    14,648

    Awards Showcase
    24 Months Award / Point Value: 50 Best Member of the Year / Point Value: 50 Best Nick Male / Point Value: 50 12 MOnths Award / Point Value: 50 Senior Most Award / Point Value: 50 3rd Position / Point Value: 100
    Total Awards: 6
    Total Points: 350

    Thanks
    164
    Thanked 236 Times in 210 Posts
    Blog Entries
    1
    Rep Power
    632
    1
    None
     
     
    Total add|reduce point: 0 times

    Default Re: Adhooray Sapnay...

    Bohat khooooooooooob Alina



    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote Share with Facebook

  10. The Following User Says Thank You to SaGhiR For This Useful Post:

    Alina (12-13-2009)
  11. 12-13-2009 05:42 PM #7
    Farhan's Avatar
    Farhan
    Farhan is offline Banned Farhan will become famous soon enough

    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    ISLO
    Posts
    2,615
    Thanks
    136
    Thanked 68 Times in 62 Posts
    Blog Entries
    4
    Rep Power
    0
    1
    None
     
     
    Total add|reduce point: 0 times

    Default Re: Adhooray Sapnay...

    awesome .. beautiful words



    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote Share with Facebook
  12. 12-13-2009 07:10 PM #8
    Alina's Avatar
    Alina
    Alina is offline FB Angels
    Alina is on a distinguished road

    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    Karachi
    Age
    20
    Posts
    180
    Thanks
    38
    Thanked 31 Times in 18 Posts
    Rep Power
    19
    1
    None
     
     
    Total add|reduce point: 0 times

    Default Re: Adhooray Sapnay...

    thanks Xeon, Saghir,Nadeem bhai N Farhan for Appreciating me...!!



    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote Share with Facebook
+ Reply to Thread
« ~ Kuch bars pehly ~ | hum dard k maarey ... »

Tags for this Thread

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts

Forum Rules